Monday, April 6, 2009
rough draft 2
this is the first re-post of the manifesto, I have attempted to add the changes without losing too much of the creativity that people had like which I hope is okay the changes are small but there. Char is you could once we get a final draft up can you possibly post it on the blog permanently like off to the side some where or underneath the beautiful banner. Thanks you guys for your feed back I feel that the blog is a good as way for us to stay in touch.
Having spent much time in the mirror the team's afros are mature and shimmer with determination. The warriors picked up their space helmets as the board the newly built UCSC Harley Davidson Space Shuttle (HDSS). While strapping in they are briefed by the instructor on the zombie threat. The zombies have been feeding on the student’s life force, financial aid, from the California Galaxy. In this struggle many of their kilted brothers and sisters have been lost fighting bravely and the team realizes that the journey ahead is long. Their mission is to retrieve a GE and with it their futures living within the California galaxy will be secured.
Having spent much time in the mirror the team's afros are mature and shimmer with determination. The warriors picked up their space helmets as the board the newly built UCSC Harley Davidson Space Shuttle (HDSS). While strapping in they are briefed by the instructor on the zombie threat. The zombies have been feeding on the student’s life force, financial aid, from the California Galaxy. In this struggle many of their kilted brothers and sisters have been lost fighting bravely and the team realizes that the journey ahead is long. Their mission is to retrieve a GE and with it their futures living within the California galaxy will be secured.
the manifesto looks great to me...i think that the conclusion is serious enough as it is...it seems like we can have a lot of fun with the concept and the images
just a few little changes if its ok with you guys
Having spent much time gazing into the mirror, the team's afros are mature and shimmer with determination. The afroed warriors pick up their space helmets as the board the newly built UCSC Harley Davidson Space Shuttle (HDSS the hogship for short?). While strapping in, they are briefed by the instructor on the zombie threat. The zombies have been sucking the student’s life force, financial aid, from the California Galaxy. In this struggle many of their kilted brothers and sisters have been lost fighting bravely and the team realizes that the journey ahead is long. Their mission is to retrieve a GE and with it their futures, as well as that of that California Galaxy, will remain hopeful.
As far as roles are concerned I would like to be a stage designer and carpenter and i could also do some assistant directing but it seems like mac has it all under control in that department.
In terms of meetings I will almost never be able to do wednesday at 2 so i guess ill go off of the blog for that stuff
- char
just a few little changes if its ok with you guys
Having spent much time gazing into the mirror, the team's afros are mature and shimmer with determination. The afroed warriors pick up their space helmets as the board the newly built UCSC Harley Davidson Space Shuttle (HDSS the hogship for short?). While strapping in, they are briefed by the instructor on the zombie threat. The zombies have been sucking the student’s life force, financial aid, from the California Galaxy. In this struggle many of their kilted brothers and sisters have been lost fighting bravely and the team realizes that the journey ahead is long. Their mission is to retrieve a GE and with it their futures, as well as that of that California Galaxy, will remain hopeful.
As far as roles are concerned I would like to be a stage designer and carpenter and i could also do some assistant directing but it seems like mac has it all under control in that department.
In terms of meetings I will almost never be able to do wednesday at 2 so i guess ill go off of the blog for that stuff
- char
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